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Happydays's avatar

Amazing rewriting of the declaration of independence. In these days of division it will be ignored. Shame.

Daniel Clarke-Serret's avatar

Thank-you so much for the comment. Another relevant video on the topic:

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=W7Bbv_kVVUI

Ruth 🟦's avatar

Bravo. I particularly like the part about severing ties with foreign authoritarians. I voted for the candidate who will continue and strengthen our alliances with other democracies. Thankful Congress protected NATO from unilateral withdrawal by a president w/o Congressional approval.

Will read your version of the Declaration again later & compare to the original.

Daniel Clarke-Serret's avatar

Thanks Ruth. This one took a lot of effort! I rearranged the phrases and added some details but the talk of savages, insurrections and the rest is language from the original but moved around for effect.

John Kornman's avatar

Much of politics in the US, Canada and Europe has been taken over byva small group of elite. They want one world government with themselves ruling the planet, the New World Order. Likely why Hungary passed No-Soros Laws to prevent them.

Frederick Tatala's avatar

My boy .... where was your John Hancock? (bad pun intended)

Based on brain fog and one read through ...... my take is that the fear of despotism makes it impossible for you to vote for Trump. Hence, you would hold your nose and vote for Harris.

Of course, you are totally wrong to worry cuz with our checks and balances and only 4 years worth of time, our wonderful Democracy will not die.

You hate Bibi, you hate Trump .... methinks there is a pattern here, LOL

Have a wonderful Shabbos and please stay out of trouble.

papa j

Daniel Clarke-Serret's avatar

Hi Jerry, I intentionally mentioned neither candidate in my reworking of the Declaration and criticisms of all sides is included. The key message, if there is one, is that America should again seek to be 1 people.

I recommend reading the original declaration to see where I got the phrases from. Expressions on savages, insurrections and the rest all came from the original but were reworked and reordered to change the context.